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The night was dreary and the rain came down She said “Lets go for a ride away from town” All thru the ride she had nothing to say It was almost as if something stood in her way Then suddenly it came, out of the blue “My parents said I have to break up w/ u” “I’m sorry” she said.. “I cant pretend” “My parents said our love must end” She took off his ring as tears came from his eyes At the same time, the fear of losing her began to arise With tears threatening to fall, he held them back As he unconsciously parked the car on a railroad track He wrote something on a piece of paper He held her hand and said “Read it later” He always wished they would never part He said in a sad voice, “You just broke my heart” She opened the door and walked out into the rain Thats when she saw the lights of the train Realising too late what she had sighted With a blink of an eye, metal collided All she could see was blood running red And someone saying, “I’m sorry..He’s dead” The ambulance sounded like an agony cry Then she read the paper and it said “Without you, I’d die”

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Answer #1

that’s great! you got me crying now. :( :( :(

Answer #2

I really like it!

Answer #3

Dang, that’s a good one. . . Pretty sad though.

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