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Am I good enough to be a poet?

I need some advice I want to be a poet but I dont think im that good with writting poems so can you tell me what you thionk about the following poem:

Sometimes

Sometimes I feel like what is my purpose Of living on this earth Sometimes I feel like I shouldn’t be alive What am I worth? Sometimes I feel like crying Sometimes I actually do Sometimes when people ask if i’m ok I end up saying yes which isn’t true Sometimes I feel like a failure And wish that I can die Sometimes I wish that all of this Was just a lie Sometimes I wish I can be someone else Someone who’s better than me Sometimes I wish that people Can just only see See how much i’m hurting, hurting really bad And how i’m always, always so sad Sometimes I feel like what is my purpose of living on this earth Sometimes I feel like I shouldn’t be alive What am I worth?

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Answer #1

I think you should be a poet.

write a variety of feelings for poems for example what makes you happy etc.

That is what makes a great poet

Answer #2

NIC33, if and e thing I’d go a lil mor in depth wit the poem and try and paint a picture wit wurds

Answer #3

why would you say that everyone deserves to live

ps that was a very good poem I love it

Answer #4

OMG, your poem is amazing!

Almost everyone can relate to it, we have all had the feelings that were expressed so wonderfully. It was so pure, so heartfelt.

Your poem expresses so many emotions. You Rock!

You should definetly contine writing. I think that you have a great talent

Answer #5

Cheer up love, lifes not that bad

Answer #6

I love it, you HAVE to be a poet (:

Answer #7

I like your attitude right there very positive “thumbs up”

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