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Am I a good poet

Poem. Question of life If pain hurts and love is love, why can’t you have one without the other?maybe because what would pain be without love and what would love be without pain.

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Answer #1

My perception of love&pain Love is pain when she’s smiling. Pain is what love produces when I’m missing the piece that defines me. Love is a sweet enchanted kiss with buttery soft lips. Pain is that same kiss with dry, cracked bleeding lips. Love is soothing, the pain. Pain is pretending not to love. You can embrace pain and begin to love it. Sometimes pain can hurt so good… Or perhaps that gash you saw, was only a scratch merely a boo boo.

What do you think am I a good poet. By ghettoheiress

Answer #2

your ok

Answer #3

Yah it’s really good but I think you should try to write some longer ones sometime because I think you have enough talent to.

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