What do you think of this work of poetry?

I wanted to write something cute for you, To help you put aside all the blue festered in you The pain swelling in your heart, Slowly stretching further, ripping you apart

I know what you say is true Some things are tried and true Reality is submissive, just like me and you A hand reaches out for you today, Will you take it, or should you stay?

I only wish to dissect the pain from you And fester it inside of me, in the sake of seeing a smile by you I’m short on words so I’ll say goodbye And hope to see you smile, in another life

~For a very special member on here, you know who you are…

Answer #1

I personally think it is beautiful…All your work always is! Cant speak for others, but I was blown away to tears! That member is very lucky to have a friend like you, to dedicate such a beautiful poem to them!

Answer #2

awww!! it’s beautiful i <3 it :)

Answer #3

It’s great, love it Miguel. Very adorable.

Answer #4

it’s beautiful. i absolutely love it if you have more plzz post them

Answer #5

Well I do have more, but you’d have to go through my questions haha :) thank you though

Answer #6

Thank you… :)

Answer #7

Haha, thanks :)

Answer #8

u’re welcome :)

Answer #9

no problem. ur work is amazing and if u r’nt published you should try to. i will gladly look through ur older posts

Answer #10

It’s really good. I love it.

Answer #11

Publish it! And the otherss! your very talented :D keep writing(:

Answer #12

This is really good! You have great talent. (=

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