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What do you think of these poetry attemps?
just wondering how these ‘attempts’ at poetry look… I’ve written a lot of em, but I generally dont show em to anyone. criticize as much as you want.
I titled it thoughts :
as I sit here in this cold dark room
I cant stop thinking only about you
missing your soft touch on me
longing for a soft kiss on thee
silent is this night
frightening is the sight
of realizing something cruel
that you will never really be there for me,
not now not ever.
my thoughts they come together
your touch it feels like leather,
your body cold as ice
why will it never feel so nice?
I am lost, so cold, so alone
please come and take me home
as my tears start to fall
I cannot hear your soft call
dead as I may be
I will always call for thee
excellent truly amazing my favourite lines are : dead as I may be / I will always call for thee
yowza your amazing :D
WOW dude im telling u your AMAZING!! haha your really good.
~wit luv belle
Well done, informer
adds you to list of favourite poets
lmao ^ ^ person above meh.
HEY!!! YOUR THE GUY THAT DISSED EMO KID!!! WHY YOU DO THAT? AND LOCKED HIM OUT!!! Oh, and yeah, your poetrys great
Awh you miss my soft touch, how nice. lol kidding darling its cute, I like we should be poets together, we’ll make a masterpiece.
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