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Who has a sad Emo poem for me???

I need a emo poem to tell my boyfriend because my bestfriend (his twin sister) told him I wrote him the saddest poem and I’m no good at it! I have tried my best but I just can’t do it! please help me

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Answer #1

sometimes I feel like I’m lonely  a tender desspair posseses me I have my world on my own  Where reigns clarity

Cz Hope no more I own  Scattered and shattered it lays For my heart is ripped and thrown And my life seems like a maze

Well did you now that’s how I felt? Did you know it begun when you left? you drew nothing in my head Just  sweet bitter thouts mislead

And every time I look at the sea At the sun down at the trees I know that this world is a quality  But what’s wrong it’s me

Now I feel so alone  I think I’m gonna mourn Yh I’ll mourn my loss And then I’ll burry myself under your thourns

Just once I bagg Pretend to love me  Ure good at lies u’ll fool me I’ve figured it out already   Lay on my lifeless side

Can I die with a smile? Pleas say you love me

Mesery prowls around Feeling a sudden pain  Thinking I’m not sane I fall to the ground 

crimson blood covers my buddy I see liitle peaces of glass 3inches deep in my flesh

And then I gasp Realizing that these are the broken peaces of of my heart

Answer #2

Depression I lie in a field of green as the soft wind blows around me. I hear nothing except the song of the trees as they sway back and forth. I close my eyes and breathe in a long breath of the sweet-smelling air. I ponder what is good. Suddenly a wave of blackness sweeps over the horizon and the sun is blackened. A chill runs up my spine. I try to move, but I am unable to. A scream attempts to leave my lips, but no sound is uttered. The descent from life to death blocks all happiness. All hope is eternally lost.

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