Which one should I do in the writing contest?

Which one should I do for a writng contest at school?I wrote them all my myself.There is:”If I could be a butterfly” If I could be a butterfly,I would be the butterfly of hope.Go to the people who have lost their way of beliving and show them that you can always belive,pray and hope that dreams do come true. I would show them the way,the path,the staircase and true meaning of beliving and hope. Many people do not see the light. That’s because you won’t let go of reality.You won’t ever see it. It’s glowing light is bright and amazing beyond belief. If you ever are down,look out the window and if you belive enough,soon you will see a beautiful,shining butterfly leading you into a beautiful,breath-taking sight. Your dream coming true. There is:”Follow your heart” Try again they say. You can do it they say while they pull you up and dust you off. Don’t give up when you do want to give up and just go home. Well,I think you should follow your heart. If you came all this way to get what you want,why quit now? Is this something you truly love doing? Follow your heart. Wherever it goes. Wherever it takes you. No matter how far,how close,or when it’s going to be. Follow your heart. Can you hear it? Can you feel it? Most important of all,can you listen to it? Follow your heart. It gives you great advice. It is gentle and nice. You can hear it pumping nonstop. Follow your heart. It is what makes you live,breathe and move. All you have to do,is listen. It’s what makes you you. Follow it with all your might. Follow it with all your strength. Follow it with your belief. Go.Your heart’s calling you. There is:”We will see eachother again someday”:You said it was going to be o.k, You said it was going to be fine, But you lied,and this thing called my heart and it’s mine. I walk away with my bag slam the door, Then I bawl,and collape on the floor. It felt like you ripped it and stomped all over it,over and over again, Don’t try and show me love.Just don’t pretend. I don’t have time for your lies and stories, But I gotta move on,I gotta keeping going. Going and going ‘till there’s nowhere else to go, Don’t come after me,and I know. You don’t matter,you don’t care, The world is cold and it’s not fair! I feel like the walls are closing in and crushing me, You don’t see what I see. I see the world as a caring kind place, but when I tell you this,you dose off into space. My tears are gone and it’s not the same as before, But sometimes in my heart I feel a little sore. I never see you again,and I guess that’s o.k, Because one way or another,we will see eachother again someday. What do you think?Be honest!!!

Answer #1

I like “We will see eachother again someday” that is my favorite of the three.. it is very pretty

Answer #2

Thank you!I write my songs,quotes and poetry myself.

Answer #3

I absolutly love the second one .. :)

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