What lyrics could I write for my song that I'm writing?

O.k. So I’m trying to write a song, and I’ve got these lyrics so far: (verse 1)’Why must you leave me like this, through all the stress and I miss, the way you looked at me every night. I’m on the edge of the world. Why did you leave me to twirl, into the sky? I wonder why. (repeating verse)It’s all fallin down, all worn out. Just because of you. You’ll never guess how. (chorus)I look you in the eye, and see it’s no surprise that you hate it. I’ll never shed that last tear. You’re here, and that’s why I care for you. Just only you. You’ And that’s what I have so far so if you could help me, that would be great! Thanks! =]

Answer #1

What can I say to make you stay? What can I do, don’t turn away. My heart’s an open book to read, but it belongs to you, it’s yours to keep. I can’t stop that last tear, it stains my cheeks as I wish you were here… Just you… Oh only you…You.

Answer #2

oh my god thats great! thanks sooo much it really helped and if you could, please make another verse? thanks!!!

Answer #3

I watch as you turn away. Please don’t go, just stay. I have to find the words to say to you. I look you in the eye, and see it’s no surprise that you hate it. I’ll never shed that last tear. You’re here, and that’s why I care for you. Just only you. You.

I’ll come up with a second verse if you like this one. If you don’t, that’s fine.

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