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ok I just finished working on a poem and I havent chosen a title yet. if you have any suggestions for a title that would be nice. and what do you think? constructive critisism would be nice…

I know you think I’m a lier, I know I made your heart hurt, but it is you I truly desire, its you that pushes me higher, because of you I’m truly alert, it’s you I truly miss, I miss when we used to flirt, I miss when we used to kiss, but now I feel like dirt.

Dirt from the ground, then who would hear a sound, if you listened from down deep, you would hear a weep, from a broken soul, that has paid his toll, with the sorrow of his life, as her worked through all his strife,

but he surely would have hid, all of his emotional sorrow, he would not have acted timid, if he’d known you would be gone tomorrow, “do not go” he would bid, but you left a while ago,

for him it was to late, he would always miss you, no matter the date, he love would stay true, until the end of time, no matter the crime, you and him will always rhyme, and that is truly your fate.

im posting this under Writing & Literature but when I tried posting it befor, it automatically switched to Love and Relationship?? Why?

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Answer #1

I think you should call it…just you.. cosits about a girl obviouslyand its just about her

Answer #2

yrue… thats one idea

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