till eternity *poem*

tonight I see her walking by again and again she mourns and cries for her soul has been left to rot little was the love she got from the one who received a lot my heart she doesnt accept the heart that has only wept with her pain it has always slept she sings to me songs of wove she tells me tales from long ago when the sun shone on our faces laced with warm and comforting embraces not with cold hard stares from passing strangers or the evil minds that have put us through dangers

oh white lotus come to me let us rest, let us just be sing me your songs of sweet beauty of those old times, from now till eternity

done in about 10 minutes, just felt like writing it… tell me what you think…

Answer #1

Love it…very touching

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