What do you think of my prologues?

They’re for my Shakespearian assessment and I was just wondering if they’re OK.

Romeo and Juliet In modern Verona our story is set, A story of woe, cause eyes to wet. For in enemy lines, a forbidden love made, And even in death, it cannot fade. Both families seemed to have it all, But when it came to each other, they had to fall. Through twisted hate, lies and lust, Two destined lovers gained each others’ trust, To keep their romance a deadly secret, And they vowed that they would keep it. The only way their betters’ found out, Was when both tragically passed. And left their families with a treaty to last. Give us a couple of hours to show, This tale of our star-crossed lovers’ woe.

Macbeth Macbeth was a man on private mission, Driven by want, aim and self-ambition. To have riches, power and forces elite, And others to grovel at his feet. Encouraged by wife, his ‘loving dear’, That being caught killing was not a fear. Unfortunately, her end was sad, Died in weakened sate after going mad. But, my audience, you all must see, This wouldn’t of happened if witches three, Had not given him his blood-drenched fate, And left him in this murderous state. But he too met a grotesque end, By sworn enemy, not a friend. So, King of Scotland, old Macbeth, His story consists of heart-break and death.

Answer #1

You did a really good job with these. They explain the stories very well and are worded well also. I’m sure these would get an A for any teacher.

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