poem... NEED HELP

can someone give me sum ideas how to start a poem about high students being peer pressured

Answer #1

wait, do ya mean, highschool, or high as in drugs, anywayz start with the tempo, like, do ya want it to be choppy: then I would discribe a certain pressure like doing drugs and describe what you would feel in that situation

4 example:

The feelings and emotions of others wanting me to join them. The confusion, the fear, the adrenaline rushing through my veins.

of course the is always more than one way, try anything you like.

Answer #2

it shoud come from you

Answer #3

thanx

Answer #4

Can you feel that high? The persuing pressure of that feeling… The daze that comes with those sounds of bubbles popping aloud.

How about this? It’s not great! But hopefully you like it!

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