Is this paragraph correctly written in Spanish? Can you point out all my mistakes?

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Hay una muchacha llamada Helen. Tiene quince años. Ella es muy bonita. Tambien ella es muy sociable y simpática. Hay muchos chicos que les gusta ella. Pero, a ella no le gusta cualquier chico. A Helen no le gusta ir a las citas con muchachos. Ella piensa que para su edad es tonto ir a citas con muchachos. Todas personas en su escuela saben que Helen no anda a citas. Pero, un dia hay un muchacho nuevo en la escuela. Se llama Kevin. Todas las muchachas piensa que él es guapo. Kevin se pone popular rapidamente. Todas las muchachas quiere ser su novia. Pues, excepto Helen. A ella no le gusta Kevin porque es malo y presumido. Pero, a Kevin le gusta Helen mucho. Los amigos de Kevin le dice que Helen no anda a citas. Pero Kevin no les escucha. Piensa que puede tener Helen como su novia. Asi que, un dia Kevin pide Helen ir a teatro con él. Por supuesto, Helen no dice que sí. Dice, “Gracias, pero no voy a citas ahora.”

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Answer #1

I suggest you take my corrections with a grain of salt because I learned Spanish primarily from listening to my mother speak so far as grammar, accent, and sentence structure is concerned I’m not too familiar with it. However, there are some things that sound funny and I’ve written them out as how I would say them down below. It’s just minor stuff that sounds funny to me but you can keep it the way it is :)

“Hay muchos chicos que les gusta a ella. “

“Todas las personas”

“El se llama Kevin.”

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Answer #2

Thanks(:

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