My newest poem-hoprful

Hopeful She sits waiting for him, She stays hopeful just waiting, Just crying, just trying to see if he cares for her, but all he does is stay home waiting for her to call, they both pick up the phone and dial each others numbers but on the first ring they both hang up, when there phones ring they think that one onther gave up but, they were both wrong then finally she gave in and they finally gave in and made up What do you think?

Answer #1

I don’t really get it.

Answer #2

I really like this one. It is nice how it ends. Keep up the good work.

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