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GoodTitle? Stop asking why do peoplecut./ Poem loll.

Im SOOOSOOSOOO tierd of reading questions. why do people cut themselfs? BLAH BLAH blAah . Whats a good title to this poem? : One morepainful day, And you cannot fight the tears, Push everything away, Because you cannot fight your fears, And the day seems too much, you’d rather leave the pain, Embrace it’s steely touch, as you cut your skin again, You dont do it for the feel,and its not for self control,. If it makes you feel alive, then what part of it is evil? As long as you survive, this razor’s my retrieval, The blood reminds you youre alive, because dead bodies don’t bleed.

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Answer #1

I really love this. Don’t know a good title though.

Answer #2

I love it!!!IT”S SOOO REAL

Answer #3

Wow..This is a really good poem. I really really love the last words “ Because Dead Bodies Don’t Bleed”

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