Good or bad or okay poem?

good poem good job 10/10

terrific :) just the grammar is a little off but when it comes to work like this, it doesn’t matter.

Actually, the poor grammar was pretty loud and it took a lot away from the actual message - you’ll need to work on that. The poem itself, however was strong…it ended on a note of hope, which is good as it doesn’t tie in with all the other cliche poetry that people seem to write about despair…it makes it more original. Remember though - poetry doesn’t have to rhyme, it only needs to flow.

agreed…poetry had to come from the heart…its has to be what you are feeling…even for the split second you may be feeling it.

I dont have the right to criticize, my work isnt great…this was powerful words yet written not as intended…its like saying a partial message w/o actually writing all of what you really want to say in my opinion! I know this because I do the same sometimes…in fact its been happening a lot lately in my last work…right miguel? :(

I think it was a very good poem. However, like others said, you need to correct the grammar.

After that, it would be great! :)

Thanks everyone :)

Yeah I’m trying to work on my grammer, I’ve gotten a lot better compared to what I use to be. I did this poem in the course of 2 days because I got the inspiration during school and didn’t have time to finish it untill the next day :/ . I know all poetry doesn’t have to ryhme, I just happened to pick out words that didn’t have many ryhming words to go with lol. And I appreciate the advice :)

wow. i like it a lot. i think ats awesome. look over it typos and spelling mistakes. in stanza 4 you wrote “your” instead of “you’re”. and in stanza 5 you wrote “there” instead of “their”. sorry if im too picky. :/ im kinda OCD about that kinda stuff. lol Sorry. but i really like it. a lot.

just let it go with the flow…:)

Thank yu :) And I don’t mind picky haha besides I like someone to correct me whenever I make a grammer mistakes cause I have many of them lol.

haha anytime. :) im glad u dont think im being too picky, i felt kinda bad correcting you. :)