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Are these good lyrics?

Everyone is a let down it just depens on how far down they can go

And in every circle of friends theres a wh*ore The one who flirts a little moooreee But whos to saaayyy This a social scene anyway And everyone wants to explaore the new girl Caught up in her own heart let the world But if it doesnt exist In the wooorld But if it doesnt exist in the wooorld And if you lie you dont deserve to have friends If you lie you dont deserve to have them If you lie you dont deserve to have friends And if youuu lieee

You are a cell out butyou couldnt even do that riiight

There is way more to it but im thinking. So honestly what do you think. Do yuo think they are ok. Good or awesome like im a misician or something?

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Answer #1

sweetie,it’s kinda cool but a bit too many grammar errors you might want to fix that

Answer #2

I LOVE IT!!! You really have great writing skills…I think you would do really good as musician but make sure that the beat is off the chain =D

Answer #3

this is WICKED AWESOME!!

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