a poem (the first of many)

in times of wove in times of pain bloody tears start to rain on the face of my one true angel she must not cry not cry for me the one who fell because he could not see oh my dear angel how far are you I know you see me but let me see you too you divine being of my torment let me touch you one last time let yourself be mine for one last heart sickening time

Answer #1

Well done!

It really tugs at the emotions.

Answer #2

That’s really good :)

Answer #3

extremly good, it pulls the reader in sooo much! I love it!

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