Who has made up a story lately??

Who has ever made up a story? I have made up a story of 2 people, a guy and a girl. There in love. I have made up 3 storys about them. The guy, sam armour, is in a band. He plays bass guitar and the growls(like singing growl). The girl, widdow westly, is a singer and a very good dancer. They go out…

I’ll give you and extract from ny story, part 1, widdow:

“so im really lucky then?” my voice rose higher near the end. “if you like to put it that way, yes.” said sam. He checked the time on his watch.”bill will be coming to play soccer, you know. So I’d get dressed.” he walked you of my room, gently closing the door.I got changed really quickly in to my 3/4 lenght joggers, a short sleeve top and my old trainers.

At that point, sam came in. “ceeffer’s here.” he sounded worried. “forget about her.” I tried to walk out but sams hand was on my stomack. I gazed into his eletric blue eyes. He leaned down to kiss me. There was a sense of worry in the way his mouth moved against mine. He moved away, and bill came up. “ya know, blackster cna’t wait all day!” he urged, then bolted it down the stairs again.

Tell me what you think!!!

Answer #1

I made up stories before.Yours is good!post more!=)I will have to show them to you sometime!=)

Answer #2

I have finished that one today and started a new story! it’s called ‘Winter Break’

heres a bit off it::

“it’s my fault.” Sam said to me. I moved so I can see him, but it caused a bit of pain. “no, it’s not. I lost balance, not you” I replied. Jenna looked at the cast on my leg. “I still thought that would never happen.” she looked out the window. yesterday seemed a bit of a rush. all I really remember was me going down a snowy hill at full speed on my snow bord and losing balance. I cracked my ankle and dislocated my knee cap.how stupid could I be? I gave Sam a heart attack. and Jenna. and a load of other people. But Ceeffers happy. she laughed whe I told her. how nice could she be? she should be greatful I pushed her before Bill puched her. Yeah, cause he just missed her and he got me. but it’s ok. were good friends.

tell me what you think of this one…

Answer #3

yeas…goood…post mooore

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