What's a Second Chance? (POEM)

This is a poem I just wrote. I know it’s not great, so, don’t be to hard on me. but I do want your oppinion. So tell me what you think and what I could change to make it better! TY!

What’s a Second Chance?

I never was a bad kid I did everything I was told But then something happened And my life turned so cold

I have changed a lot since then And done some really bad things I just did what ever I wanted As if I had wings

No one could tell me what to do Everything was about me I just wanted to get away from here I just wanted to break free

My past has ruined my life for me It has made me who I have become And I know no one is proud of that But nothing can be undone

Nothing can be undone But everything can be changed And that is what I have accomplished My bad ways have been exchanged

But no one see’s the person I am now I’m not the same rebel I was And I don’t know why I changed I guess it was just a “because”

But since I’ve done some things in the past No one trusts me at all Not even if I just take a walk I just want to give up and fall

What can I do to prove to you That things have really change I just want to grow up now No more stupid games

I am done being a child Now and forever I know it’s taken me awhile But if you look, I have recovered

I am more mature now And would really like my space You don’t have to worry no more Because I now found my place

I don’t feel the need, to fit in with everyone else I just want to be me I just want some trust Can’t you see?

Answer #1

I loved it =] itz really good & relates 2 me

Answer #2

oh wow this poem is so nice damn girl, you know what it explains my life, I was 1st such a good girl and then my whole life went just the way you wrote the poem, wow nice poem

Answer #3

Great poem, it’s really beautiful and true. I like it a lot!

Answer #4

amazing :)

Answer #5

this is just the way my life was I was a good girl and then my life changed and I did some things…

Answer #6

It’s astounding, you did wonderful with the structure, and the poem is very powerful…cheesy as that may sound! I absolutely adore this poem, you should do more in the future!

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