What more can I add to this song?

I started writing this song. But I’ve got a little bit of a block. I wanted to know your ideas. This could be either the first two verses or the chorus:

You play your game so quietly, Just like a gentle, sweet symphony. Did you ever care for me? Was it worth it at all?

Do you expect me to come crawling back? Just like a restless insomniac? Reaching out, you seep through the cracks. Was it worth it at all?

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Answer #1

the next line should be, did you ever think of making that call? if you really need to write the song, youve got to dig deep in your heart and search for he golden words. it happens to me all the time. feel it in your soul.(eless you have none) ahaha :)

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