What do you think of this song I wrote

Verse 1]

You said that countless years has gone by with no big suprise And there’s no differance between this or the last You said it;ll just be like the other times From the longest day’s to the longest night’s To the every second that ticks by To the empty bottles, can’t sleep at night It’s just no suprise that your half a life Your living half a live

[chrous]

So if you need someone to call I;ll be there listening to every word Day or night, I never turn my back If you need someone to belive in you I let you know I will

[verse 2]

You said this mess is starting to become your worst defence And your locked into the past tense You said you’ve been fighting a war so many times Against the longest days and longest nights, Your still living half a life Your living half a life

[chrous]

So if you need someone to call I;ll be there listening to every word Day or night, I never turn my back If you need someone to belive in you I let you know I will

Bridge]

From the longest day’s to the longest night’s To the every second that ticks by To the empty bottles, can’t sleep at night It’s just no suprise that your half a life Your living half a live

[chrous]

So if you need someone to call I;ll be there listening to every word Day or night, I never turn my back If you need someone to belive in you I let you know I will

I am 14 and in a band, I will combine the music on monday, this is not about me, this is for a friend :)

If oyu want to see more you can email me mrm1480@hotmail.com