What do you think of my rap ?

Hey how do you like my rap its my first one be truthful thanks Yea let me tell you this story man I was growing up in a small town with nuttin to do always taking st from all of these fools We’ve got all these rules and we dont abide by them whats the point in making them were not gonna stand by them Going to schools just the same everyday learning a load of st your not gonna use anyway Whats the point in life whats the meaning of living always taking and never giving (Chorus) I just want a normal life no more knifes big house lots of cars gotta say its better than being behind bars A’ve left that life behind me its behind bars all a can do now is hope for the best and shoot for thd stars (Verse 2) Living life on the edge and never being afraid thats how you gotta live your life if you want to get paid But what happens when the people you love dont beleive in you, you just have to pray to god you dont need them too Its all on you , its your life your living your the one thats gotta make all the desitions but whats the point in life whats the meaning of living always taking and neva giving (Chorus) (Verse 3) My heads so full of s**t I cant think should I follow my dreams what do you think Its possible to make a change if your willing to pay your way but opportunites dont come around everyday you bette be ready to fight for the right to be what you want to be No one else can tell you this it comes from my own experience You should know I’ve been living this life too long Everything I’ve done so fars been wrong Somehow I lost my courage along the way a Seem to lose the sence of right and wrong everyday Mabey I just got led astray whats the point in life whats the meaning of living always taking and never giving (Chorus)

Its not finished yet please tell me what you think and be truthful thanks (peice out)