What do you think of my new song?

This song is called I’m in Heaven, it has to do with the happiness that she brought me after coming into my life. Nothing mean please :)

Alone for the past 3 years, wondering why that is So many pretty girls in one place but I know none of them are for me New grade arrives but I know nothing is gonna change even with a hiss Doing my regular thing and just flowing with the days, or is this what I see I may be doing my work but I want a girl who I can hold and even kiss on the cheek Nobody gets what I want nor my needs and especially what I seek

Lostinthisworldwithoutlove not many get me (3x)

Days and more days go by and I’m still in the same dark mind I was in before That was until this very beautiful brunette girl wa sput in my class, yes I was stunned Right off the bat I talk to her so I could get to know her better, I felt like I was on a beach shore Feeling relaxed while talking to her put a huge smile on my face - wow that’s never been done I have this sharp feeling in my stomach as if she’s the one that I want Maybe all this time I have waited is gonna pay off because she has arrived, better than eating a donut

Lostinthisworldwithoutlove not many get me (3x)

2 Months after meeting her I talk to her online and I know immediately it’s her that I’ve been waiting for Asked her out and thankfully she said yes, finally I am taken by the girl after so much waiting Never will I do anything to screw this up cause I know without her I’ll feel like nothing but bored I thought others were th eone but man was I wrong, finally that annoying bell in my head stopped ringing I found her and she’s mine, I love her to the fullest and nothing can change that Some people doubted me, making fun of me but I feel I came out on top, simple as that

She opened my eyes and now I can see (2x) I’m in heaven cause now she’s in my life and I don’t want that to change You all stare but you’ll never see that I never had that kind of love inside me I feel loved and that’s all that matters - this is my brightest day!

Seeing her smile makes my day bright cause I see and feels she’s happy Never have I been able to make someone smile and know it’s not fake Means a lot to me to know I’m with someone who does care about me People can say all they want but we’re healthy and you can’t break us down on any day I know she’s the one cause this to me is like a new form of happiness She’s mine and I’m hers I’m finally happy with living on this universe!

She opened my eyes and now I can see (3x) I’m in heaven cause now she’s in my life and I don’t want that to change You all stare but you’ll never see that I never had that kind of love inside me I feel loved and that’s all that matters - this is my brightest day!

What do you think of it?

song written by maggot4