What do you think of my new song Fly Away?

I wrote this song while at school today,it’s not a Death Metal song,it’s more of a motivational type song having to do with a persons future,here it is:

Sitting here on the tractor after bringing in the crops Wandering into space just seeing awesome things like the future Thinking in the back of my head what that would be like Being snapped out of it by all the drops of rain - why rain I just want to..

Fly away - into the future and see what it holds Fly away - from this dead end job I hold right now Fly away - I know that I can make it I just need motivation

Going straight to my room throwing myself on the bed Face down in a pillow crying a bit cause of how I live What can I do to make it in a world I just visioned I refuse to give up on something I know is real Life in my view is becoming more and more clear All I want to do now is..

Fly away - into the future and see what it holds (2x) Fly away - from this dead end job I hold right now Fly away - I know that I can make it I just need motivation

I just know I can’t stop chasing my new dreams Even hearing that I have no future but I know it’s not true That dream will come true if I continue chasing it This is a dream A dream that I will one day live up to Don’t tell me other wise cause I just won’t listen Cause I’m gonna..

Fly away - into the future and see what it holds (3x) Fly away - from this dead end job I hold right now Fly away - I know that I can make it I just need motivation

Fly Away (4x)

What do you think of my song?

song written by maggot4 inspired by Taylor Swift songs