What do you think of this song?

I just made this song just now it’s called “In My Eyes” please don’t steal it:

(Verse) Everyday I see murders Most my time is always in the darkness Just looking for some help that not many can provide I just want to show what I see in my eyes This is killing me from the fu*king inside Help me now or I’ll cry!!!

(Chorus) Everytime someone looks into my eyes They say they can’t help me in anyway But I know someone out there knows… What is happening in my world

(verse) Looking at the destruction that I’ve seen in my own visions Noone believes a word that I say Not even a girl to call me her baby when I need it Searchin through others blood and bones I don’t see not one thing to help me!!! What the hell should do???

(Chorus) Everytime someone looks into my eyes They say they can’t help me in anyway But I know someone out there knows… What is happening in my world

(verse) I just feel like I’m dying in my own body Not one piece of help has come my way I feel like noone sees what I’m going through in this damn world Someone please help and tell me what to do??? I don’t want to die like this!!!

(Chorus) Everytime someone looks into my eyes They say they can’t help me in anyway But I know someone out there knows… What is happening in my world

(Verse End) Slowly running out of breathe Never in my life did I find help I know for sure that God will protect my spirit while I come his way I’m sorry to everyone I made mad at me… If only you knew what was in my eyes