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What do you think about my rap?

Tell me what you think about my rap so far

Its s ta the lim when did this $h!t begin Im fire ta hell because this shits a sin In the game with the devil he ant ever going to win He ant ever going to win He ant ever going to win What made this life so hard Getting shot leaving scars Crimanals get locked behind bars Make it 18 or be living with the stars

This world isent easy now With all this $h!t going down Think your hood is bad This is my town Binghamton on solid ground

Oak st waverly ready to get laid Poast at 1 stop thats a good pay Hemies stand ya ground you need to get ya yay teens haveing babies every day My own mom is a crack head Trying tha thefe my bread Get shot in the head Go prostatuite instead My fatjers locked in jail Cant get bail Every day is a life in hell I got good $h!t need to make a sale

Even these cops looking to get poped If ya just give it up wont get locked this $h!t gotta stop

If you ant on my team you wont make it to 18 on my block Mess with us then know you will get shot I ant scared to get locked Because im best friends with the head cop

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Answer #1

well first off rap without the swearing, learn to do that pretty good and have the same affect as swearing and you are on the way to stardom… Also grammar and spelling hardcore man

Answer #2

It really needs to be spell checked.

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