What advice could you give me for my movie?

I’m an aspiring filmmaker and only recently started to make my own films. What advice could you give me on my first short film (besides the fact that it drags on in the beginning… sorry haha)?

Answer #1

You could try using some more different camera angles and special effects :)

Answer #2

I bit more clarity on the words of people, like it’s super fuzzy to me.. and when the two girls are lying down, it kind of looked like they were sleeping, so add some more blood and emphasize that they are actually dead.. the acting is a little dull, but you guys are just having fun (: hahaha good luck (:

Answer #3

You could do one of those abstract videos with a couple of silent scenes with dark music in it… Something about a death or break up… One of which I’m currently going through… FunMail me if you have any questions

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