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What about this poem named Robots?

Heads turn to see nothing, While the world has many views. Hands clasped together, With feelings very few.

Every corner of this aging Earth, Shows life and death first hand. Which one is mostly feared, On this unforgiving land.

Signs of nature make its mark, The sky lets out a cry. If there is so much pain, Why are they afraid to die.

Life spreads its wings, Along such barren minds. Each filler with too much, Too scared to look behind.

Is there too much to be done, Not enough to be unsaid. The world waits to be seen, Happiness only wants to be read.

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Answer #1

I think its really good only this line

If there is so much pain, Why are they afraid to die.

That seems a bit controversial to me just wanted to point that out to you k =)

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