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Ghosts~~~ I do it everyday,it hurts so much, these badges on my arms are remiders,of my past.

Chances~~~ I look you in the eyes you don’t see me, you don’t listen when I say hello, I’m wondering if you think of me as a friend or fo, you don’t even notice me, I’ve considered letting you be, but I can’t, I can’t, you are the other half of me,the part that I’ve never been able to see, the part of my life I’ve felt like I’ve been missing all along, so give me one chance, one dance , to make up my mind, figure it out, so would you be so kind, to lend me your hand, and listen to the band…give me one chance…

~the first one I wrote around march. ~the last one I have no idea if it sounds right because I had a wierd beat going through my head while writing it so it might no sound like a poem.and I just wrote it off the top of my head.

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Answer #1

well actually I just put it up because I thought it reminded myself of me-I know wierd way to put it but it did.

Answer #2

Cool. Chances are a prickly subject for me. Your second poem reminded me of my high school days. I was pretty quiet and missed opportunities like getting really pretty girls that I was infatuated with. Girls have a way of toying with guys. I wish I was given second chances. Just way too damn quiet.

Answer #3

they are good, if you have more please share them, I can connect to the chances one in my own..weird way

Answer #4

thx actually I have a few more if you go to groups then search poems you could go to my group or the other poetry group that was updated like a few minues ago.

Answer #5

thx I have a poetry group, and I’m in milanea’s group-not sure on the spelling-

Answer #6

wow, there great I really like them, I’d like to read more.

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