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The dentist- a poem

What do you think of this poem that my niece wrote.

            The Dentist

He sticks his fingers down my throat desperately trying to make me choke. He turns my face both black and blue grinning as he does it too. He fills my teeth with white cement my pains and sorrows I lament. I guess it’s true for everyone dentists aren’t any fun!

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Answer #1

I think she needs to find a new dentist honestly lol but its a good stright to the point type of poem which sounds like she could become a very good writer

Answer #2

hahaha I love itits funny you should publish it :)

Answer #3

lol, I llove it, cause it’s true!!!

Answer #4

ok, ok,ok…

Answer #5

haha this made me laugh! i love it!(the poem, not the dentist haha).

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