Tearful eyes

Tell me if you like this poem or not. Be honest.

The dawnbreak came alive Through these tearful eyes And the love has been torn apart Cause of the shattered heart And it sit alolne, staring down But nothing’s around The dreadful fear beats more For what was saw before The stinging pain dies away For the day That the death of my life Have reappeared Through those tearful eyes

Answer #1

you have a lot of talent. be proud of your gift and inspire others. I can see clearly what it is about. Fantastic!

Answer #2

Ahh. It’s fantastic. Very touching and beautiful.

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