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Sweet, Sweet Poems

Give me some poems!! It could be one you wrote or one you know. Either one is dandy.

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Answer #1

This one is mine: http://www.funadvice.com/q/what_do_you_think_of_my_poem_96804

Answer #2

go to quizilla.com . a lot of the people on there are really good poets.

Answer #3

this one… I wrote dis poem…

try 2 read it…^^

—>Youve sang my agonizing harmony, Youve painted colors on my sight, Youve lighten up my dim world, Youve found me unconcious And woven my wounded heart.

But why???, words pitched at me, Your gaving it all up, You throw it all away, That hurtful words was killing me inside, You left me broken hearted.

Baby,its hard on me to tear myself away from you, Nor, I dont want to be a fright and pretendings everythings alright. No!, I wont even sit here and die…

Im ganna lick d knife W/ all my tears… Im ganna embrace d chain, W/ all my blood, Im ganna scream w/ d gun, W/ all my heart, Im ganna swallow swords, W/ all my pride, Just 2 have you again.

So this time, im ganna throw it all away, One hundred forty three words…

I love you..!!!

—>I hope you like it…

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