Song I write

I just wrote a song and I just wanted to know if it was good or doe it need work… Thanks

Torn

[intro] Im spilling my heart out for you, And it feels like its torn. I would not know what to do, If you were not born.

[v1] I cant stand this pain im feeling, Cause my heart has gone for you. My heart will never be heeling, Its been torn into two.

[chorus] I gave my heart to you my true love, Cause you fly over me like a dove. You have torn my heart in two, Now I am feeling so deeply blue.

[v2] I have falling for you over again, But you will never love me like that. I hope youll see I love you more like a sin, But right now I am dying were I sat.

[chorus] I gave my heart to you my true love, Cause you fly over me like a dove. You have torn my heart in two, Now I am feeling so deeply blue.

[bridge] You always deserve the best, And that should be me. But you love him more I guess, So thats the way it will be.

[v3] Without you I feel lonely, And you dont really care. Im just thinking about you and me, But you love him and give me a stare.