Should I show this song to my girl friend and my band???

I wrote this song for and about my girl friend when I was unsure about are our relationship I never showed it to her and I have keept it secret from my band to as I dont normaly write songs like this and it is not the normal style we play. I dont konw what to do and would love help. Thank you

You’re the reason I live, Now the reason I am alive, The person I stay for. With out you I will die. I love you now more then ever, And I want to roll with you. Forever. Forever. And…

Seeing you, makes me lose my fear. Holding you- oh you feel oh so near. You may be so far away from me, But I will love you. As long as you can love me. I will pray that you’ll say “i love you to” I’ll stay by you to the end it’s true.

You’re the reason I live, You’re the reason I am alive, The person I stay for. With out you I will die. I love you now more then ever, And I want to roll with you. Forever. Forever. And…

I see you there and I want to call, I look around, - and I see, All I want is you, is all you wa-nt me?? Oh babe, tell me that you love me today. I say it every night, do you feel the same?? When you say the things you say to me. You make me happy and smile with all glee.

You’re the reason I live, Now the reason I am alive, The person I stay for. With out you I will die. I love you now more then ever, And I want to roll with you. Forever. Forever. And…

I close my eyes, I’ll count to three, I look around, again you’re all I see. I need you hear, in my arms.

I need you there, do you need me??

Why do I wonder why I look around?? Am I unsure ?? Do I ever frown?? Are you the one I adore?? Or are you not for me?? I don’t know if it is you I need?? Do you cover something up for me???

Are you the reason I live?? Are you the reason I am alive?? Are you the person I stay for?? With you can I still die?? Do love you now?? More then ever?? Do I want to roll with you??. Forever?? Forever??

Answer #1

deff show it to her, I remember when my boyfriend showed me the chorus to the song he wrote for me, I loved it. He is playing it for me live at a coffee house soon, and I swear I am going to cry. Show off your talent!

Answer #2

yeah its really great I think you should because thats how I am I express myself through music…thats actually the only way I could express myself and I think your sort of like me…but I know she’ll lobve because that songs great!

Answer #3

I think you should it’s really nice I love it I think your girl will like it to probably way more than I do but who cares if it is not your original style that you play in there’s a first for every thing.. :) and this is just my opinion you don’t have to go wit it if you don’t want to it’s your choice.. :)

Answer #4

thanks. I don’t know what it is, but I prefer to get the oppinion of someone I dont know first as I know they will tell the truth. and I thinkn I will take it to the band then show my girfriend

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