Scary or not?

There Was This girl And she Was with Her friend. They were looking through peoples Myspaces. The girl slowly came upon this one Myspace. It had creatures in the background and The man looked like a psycho. She started laughing with her friend Commenting on how ugly he was. Right then, an instant message came Up. It said:

Satanstalker: so how do you like my Myspace?

Xxlovemexx: what?

Xxlovemexx: who is this anyway?

Satanstalker: well, you should know; Youre looking at my myspace right now.

Xxlovemexx: how do you know?

Satanstalker:I know I know when People look at my myspace.

Xxlovemexx: what? That doesnt make Any sense, how?

Satanstalker: I just do.

Satanstalker: especially to pretty Girls like you.

Satanstalker: with very nice legs I Might say. At the time the girl was wearing high Shorts She started to pull them down a little Bit to cover what ever she could Her and her friend started to get Worried now.

Xxlovemexx: ok whatever man youre Starting to scare me.

Satanstalker: you should be afraid.

Satanstalker: you wouldnt want an ugly Guy like me touching your legs huh? I Mean thats what you just said about me With your friend like a minute ago.

They were in shock. Her friend: holy crap man just block Him hes a freaking psycho!

The girl: ok holy crap, you think hes Watching us?

Satanstalker: I am.

Satanstalker: well it wouldnt really Matter if you blocked me anyway; it Wouldnt stop me from coming to your House

Xxlovemexx: what? My house?

Satanstalker: yeah, youre alone so its Not a problem.

Xxlovemexx: ok I think im going to Leave now because youre freaking me Out.

Satanstalker: your screen name says Love me, trust me that wont be a problem

Satanstalker has just signed off.

The girl and her friend were really Scared.

Girls friend: whatever lets just go Upstairs trust me I doubt hes really Coming. Its just a joke from someone. They went upstairs and were Having a pillow fight.

All of a sudden The girlfriends said she had to go to The bathroom. The girl said ok. Ten minutes later the girl noticed That her Friend Was Still in the bathroom and was wondering What Was Up.

She goes and knocks but no one said Anything

She opens it and finds her friend There on The Ground dead. She started to scream but When She Turned around he was there.he Next Morning the news said that there was one girl Dead In The Bathroom; her neck sliced with blood All Over The Ground. With her head nailed to the Wall. Just Her head.

Answer #1

No its not scrary it takes a lot more to scare me…but it a good story just work on it a little babe and keep up the good work ;)

Answer #2

Gah! Im home alone now! EKkkk now im scaredd

Answer #3

It’s kinda scary it could be better try to rewrite it.

Answer #4

yea itz kinda scary at first but then it getz less scary at the end but yea itz a good story =]

Answer #5

Lol, Gcumbr

No, not scary :S Sorry…

The writing is not good either.

Answer #6

lovely story…lol kinda creepy

Answer #7

And I bet they found a hook in the handle of the cardoor too…lol

Answer #8

quite scary I spose, if it was to happen in real life. Why???

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