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Roses *poem*

How beautiful the roses look How wondrous the thorns like hooks How filled with passion they all seem Wavering in the suns gleam How innocent to the touch Blooming oh so very lush They sprout upon the richest earth All the humans they immerse In their world of love and hurt

But underneath these flowers dwell The beings no one knows so well Filled with sorrow they all cry For those who let them die Whom they gave their last goodbyes Bitter sweet were all their lies Bringing tears to their loved ones eyes

As death parted the maiden from sin There her heart, to beat, it will begin For the rose, the beautiful rose, keeps a secret deep inside Only souls of pure thought Will be freed and never again lost

If you can find the meaning youll get a special thank you :d

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I love it :). you write with passion, and you emphasise each individual line. Nice work

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