Portland Girl (new song)

so im slowly putting together a solo cd because my band likes to take their sweet aśś time doin shît. So here is a song I wrote about a girl that I lost a long time ago. Heres “Portland Girl” comments suggestions and smartasś comments?

Portland Wont Be Callin For Me It doesnt look like she fallin for me That portland girl and me will never be

Took a long hit from a peace pipe As the sunshine hits my sports car I got a brain full of LSD and a couple of butterflies tumbling in my stomach, the tears in my eyes Well I just lost my girl today She says “ thats life honey “

Portland wont be callin for me It doesnt look like shes fallin for me That portland girl and me will never be

So im stuck in california riding my broken wings While shes all perfumed up that pretty thing So live and learn Sit and burn Looks like I finally got beat Im just an angry young man And she was so sweet

Babe ill work on my looks Read all your books Do all that I can to be your biggest fan

Portland wont be callin for me It doesnt look like shes fallin me That portland girl and me

red rover red rover Wont you send her back over Why did I have to drive her away?

So come on tequila sour Come around and keep me low She spendin her nights Under stary lights And im sure shes not alone…