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My wrists are bleeding and I cant see. My life is nothing but a fantasy. No one knows who I really am.. Because I’m not even sure if I can.. I lie here now on my floor.. Saying goodbye as you come through my door. Waiting and yelling is all I can hear.. As I say my last prayers and you dissapear. I’m dead now and you can see. I’m hapire than I’ll ever be. I love you all but you must know.. I’m nothing special so let me go.

From my heart to urs!!

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Answer #1

wow!! I am speechless!!

those were amazing!!!

Answer #2

WOW I am breathless

Answer #3

I THINK IT IS GOOD…SAD…IF THATZ HOW you FEEL. I UNDERSTAND IF you want to TALK…IMA HERE

Answer #4

OMG. that was so goood! Bravo times a million! that was graded 10 out of 10 ♥♥♥♥♥ you guys are all good at writing I need some of your skillz

Answer #5

hya its me.. I cut my wrists and I dont know what to do. I want to die.. but it seems like its up to you!! if anyone can help. come seek and find. the girl in pain the girl in mymind… thanx again it me up and tell me what you think.. xoxoxox emo_gurl!!!

Answer #6

nice… it was very deep

Answer #7

Ha Ha thanx yal… really apriciate it.. might as well start somewhere!! lol :)

Answer #8

omg…I LOVE that poem

Answer #9

How was that a question?

Answer #10

wow. all I can say is I love it and I can relate to it, totally awesome. keep it up. =]

Answer #11

keep it up its sad but good ausome sis love ya

Answer #12

one of da best damn poems I’ve read girl…its just simply well written and perfectly delivered

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