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poem of depression

I sit and stare at the same walls each night, without a word I listen to the arguments, and I feel like I started the fight. It may seem wrong, but it feels so right. It’s a load that’s so hard to carry, a friend who’s hard to burry, and a girl I love but I’ll never marry. My hope is dying as my trust is crying, but still I’m fu*kin trying to reach the top of these stairs. I have a billion miles ahead of me, and then I have to swim across the sea, before I fall above to a place, that’s so full of grace once I’ve gone without a trace. And I’ll leave my trasure behind, at the top of the stairs, for my special lover to find, but no one has love to share. I floor the peddal but never bother to steer. The walls are metal, but death should not be feared. I thought I had finally down and settled, but no one is here, to answer when I call. And if no one catches my tears, who will catch me when I fall?

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Answer #1

Hey man! Nice poem there. so full of emotions and so deep. I love it!

Answer #2

:( ..why are you soo down matty..? Its a nice poem..

Answer #3

Your feelings are strong, your troubles deep. Keep on going until they send a fleet of people looking for the one gone bye he ran so fast didn’t have time to cry he just runs from what he cannot hide runs until the world stops spinning never ending this is the beginning

Answer #4

That is one of the best poems I have ever read. No joke. If you wrote that you need to write more. Loved it.

Answer #5

Amazing.. purely amazing.

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