Would this be an ok poem to hand in for a poem assignment at school ?

Have you ever wondered , wondered what it would be like if you actually could change all your flaws ? Would you truely be happy in the end ? If you think you would be happy , well you’re wrong . Plastic surgery doesn’t make you any better than you were before . Because now , now youre fake . That’s worse than having imperfections . Imperfections make you perfect . ( I wrote it myself , which we were supposed to do , I just wanted to know if I could hand it in like this and not get embarrassed about )

Answer #1

yESSS

Answer #2

It seems well written.

Answer #3

yep :)

Answer #4

if u want u can add ‘ u r faker than barbie’

Answer #5

God , ur talented i wud give u the full mark if i were ur teacher

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