have to write this short story that end with this sentence

sorry to you nini89 thanks for the help all I didnt mean to be rude but I was just trying to tell you what I meant

Just so you know, you should never come to an online forum or any other outlet for help with writing a paper. If they find you guilty of plagarism (yes, it would be plagarism), you can be in quite a bit of trouble - some students get a zero for easy punishment and some schools are so intolerant they expell students.

But, I will give you a hint of helpful advice and let you know that you spelled “realized” incorrectly.

Have a good one!

I already did the paper I just wanted to no what other people could come up with don t have to be so touchy my friend jmade up some really funny sh*t so I was just wonderin

hehe my thinking cap never works when I get up first time in the morning ( arvo more like it at the moment) but here is something that may help you out a tad. :)

With a heavy heart, Jennifer pierced outside her bedroom window and with a loud thundering voice, she yelled out at the top of her lungs, nothing in her life will ever be the same again. With the lingering sadness, she wipes away her tears and tucks herself into bed and hopes tomorrow will soon arrive and a new day commences.

PS: to the person who said the poster had the word REALIZE incorrectly hmmm, if she or he is from Australia or England, we spelt REALISE with an ISE not IZE . :)

First you have to brain storm all the life changing things that could happen to Jennifer. She could get pregant, paralyzed, death in the family,move from where she grew up. Then you need to pick a setting and the other Characters names. Just have fun. You will be done in no time.

Well, excuse me for not knowing that she was from England or Australia. I’m an English tutor, but I was not thinking about the foreign country thing. Spelling ‘realize’ as ‘realise’ is a very common mistake among the majority of my students. That is something I have to correct often.

So, amyll9, it can actually be ‘realize’ or ‘realise’ - depending on the country. That’s something I did not know.

And I don’t know how I’m being touchy by telling you something that could save your butt. It was meant to be helpful. If you think that is touchy, then I don’t know what to tell you.

And when you posted, you said you “have to write” - not that you “have written”. There is a difference.