Not again poem

What do you think? Should I publish a book of poems or not? I need to know please.

Not again I am here and all alone These tears that I’m crying are made of stone. This life of mine has been turned upside down And no one is there to hear my sounds

I have this time all locked up to me And this heartache is here forever so flee I need to know what I can do The time has come to tell you the truth

Oh no not again I refuse to let you hurt me and sin This time is here and I feel so left behind But the line that I have is mine all mine.

Oh no never ever again My time’s not for you and I feel so destined. I’m destined to find the way back to you And I know how to do this if you will do it to.

Oh no never ever again I feel the hatred flowing again and again If you hate me for choosing what I want to do Then I say never ever and forever will I ever choose you.

What do you think? I need to know. I want to publish my poems and see if they will sell do any of you think that they will? I really need the advice to publish or not to publish this. Please!!! :):):):)

Answer #1

I think you should. Look out for local poem competitions and go from there. 8D

Answer #2

Sounds very good and affecianate…I’d go for it

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