Is my poem rubbish?

I love you

I love you more &+ more each day, it get’s so hard to hear them whispier behind my back sayin yeah he did this he done that he cheated on her, but baby I dont know what to belive, they say you loved a girl who was your word, you said you loved her more then you could ever love me .. babyee but secreatly I know she loves you, s this just a wind up or a fear of a fraction you loved her more, baby im crazy for you;; I just want to die in your arms, so my soul will transparnt to you &+ I will always be yours , you really dont know what you mean to me, and I would never hurt you ,baby you was the one who let me go, maybe this fraction of a half is true, but babyee its not a half at all is it baby its a quater, I thought I could trust you with my heart, it sumed up all and tookaway babes this is no maths quiz, if you love me sum it up and take away her , dont sum us all up and then go and take me away , baby im not here forever’

Answer #1

loved it!!!:]

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