My Poem

Judgement

They stop at a light but just for a second well that’s what they think, beacuse all of a sudden their in a new place a place of saddness, depression, madness. They wonder wats going on, then they all say at the same time “your ours!!” but they aren’t scared ‘cause they think someone is playing a prank on them so they get out of the car laughing and saying “oooh, I’m sooo scared” says jonhathan. But then there’s this ear pirceing screech of a man then a gig huge gust of wind and in it it says “u should be!!!” then out of no where there’s this man in a trench coat, and on his face there’s anger & depression beacuse he also stopped at that light, the light of the judgement…every 3,000 years or so a portal opens taking people who don’t care about anyone or anything. But it only opens for those people who need a to learn how selfish there being, and they can only leave if the lesson was learned. Which is very rare ‘cause there have only been 3 people who have left. Beacuse it was just an act, a mask. They just did it to fit in, to be feared, respected. But they actually did care they were even willing to die for there boyfriend, husband, girlfriend, wife, but they were wrong there boyfriend, or girlfriend didn’t care that much for them so the ones that were willing to make the sacrifce were let go. The man in the trench coat was one of the people who were let go but he went back to save the one person he loved his wife. He told johnathan and the women that they would have to prove themselfs, but johnathan said “ya rite, c’mon diana let’s go” but she actually listened to theman in the trench coat and turned ta johnathan and said “no” baecuse she knew this man, he was somebody she loved… her husband!!

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