My poem?

Do you think that this is a good poem?:

At the peak of blackness in the night You see me for who I truly am

In the burning light of day You kiss me because of who I am

In the time when the sun sets low You call me to tell me how much you love me

At the breaking of the day You told me something that confused me

In the mid-morning sun I had figured it out And you said good-bye one last time.

Answer #1

cool.

~Kaff~

Answer #2

I like it…pretty deap.

Answer #3

I like it. especially the end half

Answer #4

That is an amense poem cool beans

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