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My life is in your hands

My life is here And in your hands The pain I feel So easily healed

This time with you And the time alone Are all so painful Just answer your phone

I look and see The pain that you hide But the truth behind it Are all just lies

I come to you and weep these tears But that won’t help ease my fears Even when you say your there You are not is that really fair

My life is now in your hands Keep it safe forever and Don’t tell me you don’t want it Because all I hear is what the f**k.

The time is here now forever more Don’t forget your the one I adore The end:):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):):)

Dedicated to my friend cheney. What do you think good bad sad what? I hope to hear some nicer comments on this one. ;) thanks Emodancer

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Answer #1

Its just that the lines are short for the first 3 sections then the last 3 sections are longer. You should try to stick with one of the other so your poem doesn’t go off beat.

Answer #2

ok thank you that was nice…? lol just kidding thank you.

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