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okk,,I have an free english project and I can do it about any thing I want,,and I luv to be special and make a new & weird ideas,,..for exaple my last free project was about (10 modern discoveries we cant live without) ,,,and the 1 before it was about (a social site) now am makin about (chocolate) my project:-

 Chocolate has become one of the most popular flavours in the world,its a common ingredient in many snacks and deserts like cookies,cakes,ice-creams,pies and candies.The story of chocolate spans more than 2,000 years and now circles the globe.The tale began in the tropical rainforests in central and south america where cocoa first grew.and chocolate is made from the seed of the cocoa tree,besides its delecious taste it has many benifits such as :-

Decreasing blood pressure. Improving circulation. Lower death from heart disease. It has been used to help treat patients with kindey stones & poor appetite.

But rather, to benifit from eating chocolate,one should be eating dark chocolates that have a high percentage of cocoa content…

but I really dont know how to end this project,,plees give me a good ending a dont forget to evaluate it :P thnks,

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Answer #1

I did interduce it before I read your suggestionss guyzz :P ,,,but itss okayy ,,,thnxxx so much :D

Answer #2

TALK A LITTLE ABOUT THE DARK AND CHOCLATE sry I was on capslock… andthen white choclate and the milk choclate talk abou t how it has changed and abou t brands and stuff and in the end go In conclusion, choclate has… blah blah blah you pretty much repeat what you sed in the intro but don trite eeeverything from the intro paragraph and neeever put new info about choclate or its history in the conclusion the conclusion wraps it you not adds more

you did a great job I hop you get an A!!!

Answer #3

Wow I didn’t know that stuff, I’m eating more chocolate! You could do a survey and see which chocolate people like most ? Just sugesting lol.

Answer #4

I’d suggest you end it by reminding the reader that these benefits are found in DARK chocolate, especially if the chocolate bar (or whatever) has at least 70% unsweetened cocoa content. Sorry, but the more popular sweet milk chocolate and all the rest just don’t deliver. .

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