May you read over my essay?

I had to write a 340 word essay., I wrote about Twlight the book. someone who is good with English grammer look over for grammer, tense changes,commas and semi-colons, anything like that.

This is the first book out of four. The book is fiction, its main character is Isabella Swan; also short for Bella. Her parent’s divorced when Bella was six months old. Bella lives with her mom in phoenix, Arizona, until Bella’s mother has recently married Phil Dwyer,a minor league baseball player. Phil has to travel a lot, and Bella sees how much her mom wants to spend time with Phil. So, to make it easier for them, Bella moves back to her birth town of Forks, Washington, to live with her Dad Charlie Swan. Bella attends Forks High school and she makes a couple of friends, but she notices one group of people at Forks High School the Cullens. A mysterious family consisting of five adopted children, Out of the 5 of them Bella is drawn to one, Edward Cullen. Later on in the story Bella finds out from a Family friend, Jacob Black tells Bella the Cullen’s are said to be vampires. They don’t drink human blood only blood of animals. Bella does run into Edward Cullen, who saves her life three times. As Edward and Bella get to know each other better, it is hard for Edward to be near her, because he thirsts for her blood. Despite his desire for her blood, Edward and Bella fall passionately in love. Edward introduces Bella to his family. Bella is accepted by them and is invited to a baseball game. At the baseball game they run into trouble. Another group of vampires show up. James tricks Bella into being alone with him and Edward shows up in the nick of time and kills James. At the end Edward and Bella go to prom. There are high levels of tension as the book ends, because of Edward and Bella’s differences of opinion about turning Bella into a vampire. Edward has been 17 for 90 year. Bella just wants to love Edward for eternity. Edward wants her to stay human, because he will love her at any age.