What do you think of my lyrics?

(soft acoustic song) You said go home But I hate being all alone You’re my everything More than I ever wanted There’s plenty of fish in the sea So the waters Is where you’ll find me After all you said it’s for the best But comparisons are easily done Once you know perfection Cause when I’m alone I’m thinking of you (background: thinking of you x2) What would you do If you were the one who was holding me tight You always said it would be alright When you have a broken heart Reality is the hardest part You have to face it Because there’s no use running into a bottomless pit To me you’re the best And I do regret Now the lesson is learned I touch and got burned Cause when I’m with him imp thinking of you (background: thinking of you x2) What would you do If you were the one who was holding me tight You always said it would be alright I kiss his lips I taste your mouth He drew me in and I hated myself Cause when I’m always thinking of you (background: thinking of you x2) No matter what I do Don’t let this be goodbye Cause I want to stay in your eyes

Answer #1

cool

Answer #2

oh and be honest, criticism only helps, thanks

Answer #3

ok, it was shite. nah im just jokin, it was good when i playd it in my head.

Answer #4

I really like it. :) Very nice…very meaningful…can you play guitar and sing along to the lyrics?

Answer #5

yeah but i dont know how to record on anything lol. but could you help me with something else ? do you know how to upload lyrics to deviantART. com (im trying to do it with these but im new there and have no clue how)

Answer #6

I like it a little long when u read it but i like it :)

Answer #7

Good lyrics but if I had to play Devil’s advocate, I’d say they are a bit long for practical use in a contemporary song. Nice from a poetic standpoint though.

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